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Prose Poems: A Question and An Answer #poetry #MondayBlogs

For my online poetry class last week, we discussed the “prose poem.”  Now I remember from (way) back in the day when I was intrigued by prose poems because they seemed less intimidating than the usual poetry forms.  Prose poems seemed more like writing flash fiction or flash nonfiction.  Something I could do without having to worry about meter and foots and stuff like that. 

One of the discussion forums presented three examples of prose poetry as a “slippery bean”: too far one way and it becomes flash fiction; too far the other way and it may become a lyrical essay.  Then the question: “Is the prose poem’s proximity to other genres the danger of the prose poem or the benefit of it?”

Those who know me well know that I don’t care for how (any) writing is categorized.  Read on for the three examples and for my response.  Finally, if you’re still with me, read to the end for my own “prose poem.”


Prose poem by Charles Simic:

I ran into the poet Mark Strand on the street. He immediately challenged me by drinking a glass of wine while standing on his head. I was astonished. He didn’t even spill a drop. It was one of the bottles Baudelaire stole from his stepfather the Ambassador in 1848. “Is this what is known as subjective reality?” I asked. Years ago this same Strand translated a famous Quechua poem about a man raising a fly with wings of gold in a green bottle, and now look at him!

An excerpt from a piece of flash fiction, “Continuity of the Parks,” by Julio Cortázar:

He had begun to read the novel a few days before. He had put it aside because of some urgent business conferences, opened it again on his way back to the estate by train; he permitted himself a slowly growing interest in the plot, in the characterizations. That afternoon, after writing a letter giving his power of attorney and discussing a matter of joint ownership with the manager of his estate, he returned to the book in the tranquility of his study which looked out upon the park with its oaks. Sprawled in his favorite armchair, its back toward the door–even the possibility of an intrusion would have irritated him, had he thought of it–he let his left hand caress repeatedly the green velvet upholstery and set to reading the final chapters. He remembered effortlessly the names and his mental image of the characters; the novel spread its glamour over him almost at once. He tasted the almost perverse pleasure of disengaging himself line by line from the things around him, and at the same time feeling his head rest comfortably on the green velvet of the chair with its high back, sensing that the cigarettes rested within reach of his hand, that beyond the great windows the air of afternoon danced under the oak trees in the park. Word by word, licked up the sordid dilemma of the hero and heroine, letting himself be absorbed to the point where the images settled down and took on color and movement, he was witness to the final encounter in the mountain cabin.

A lyric essay (section of a book-length one) by Maggie Nelson from Bluets:

Some things do change, however. A membrane can simply rip off your life, like a skin of congealed paint torn off the top of a can. I remember that day very clearly: I had received a phone call. A friend had been in an accident. Perhaps she would not live. She had very little face, and her spine was broken in two places. She had not yet moved; the doctor described her as “a pebble in water.” I walked around Brooklyn and noticed that the faded periwinkle of the abandoned Mobil gas station on the corner was suddenly blooming. In the baby-shit yellow showers at my gym, where snow sometimes fluttered in through the cracked gated windows, I noticed that the yellow paint was peeling in spots, and a decent, industrial blue was trying to creep in. At the bottom of the swimming pool, I watched the white winter light spangle the cloudy blue and I knew together they made God. When I walked into my friend’s hospital room, her eyes were a piercing, pale blue and the only part of her body that could move. I was scared. So was she. The blue was beating.

My response:

I’m reading The Lacuna by Barbara Kingsolver which is a long read not just because it’s a long book, but there so much poetry in the language of the narrative.  I don’t like “pigeon-holing” writing:  this is a poem, this is an essay, this is flash fiction.  I think prose poetry’s proximity to fiction (or nonfiction) enhances the read, at least for me.  Must it be one or the other?  If each of the three pieces Mary shared “works,” does the genre matter?  I’m not trying to argue.  It’s the lowest common denominator effect of classification that troubles me.  I work with data at my day job, and see daily the loss of information (poetry?) when we produce aggregated results, that data that speaks only to the largest groupings of people; for example, Hispanic, Non-Hispanic White, Non-Hispanic Black.  It’s a necessity in my line of work (public health), but it doesn’t help the people who don’t fit neatly into those categories.

My prose poem (submitted assignment):

I felt the staccato snap of each vertebrae in my spine as I lengthened and then twisted my torso in Trikonasana, Triangle Pose, and wondered how much longer I could keep looking up at the ceiling before I lost all feeling in my neck.  The yogi urges me to take two more waves of breath and then release—slowly—back up to Virabhadrasana II, Warrior Two.  Pause.  Then I am exhorted to drop my right arm down and behind, grazing my hand against the back of my left thigh, and lift my left arm, shining my heart to the ceiling for Reverse, or Proud, Warrior.  I inhale, then exhale, then inhale and slowly straighten my left leg for Stargazer, my favorite pose because it reminds of you.  I imagine us both reaching for the stars, me metaphorically and you literally with your fancy camera and telescope.  The shutter of your camera snaps in time with my spine.

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Marie A Bailey

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20 replies

  1. This was me when I tried the tree pose for the first time! 😀
    Thanks for printing those examples, Marie. I also wondered what the difference was between them. A very fine line indeed.

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    1. Oh, goodness, tree pose … I’m still stuck with just putting my foot on my calf and balancing there 😉 There is a fine line among those examples. A few students who had poems published noted how their poems would be edited depending on whether editors thought their poem was more prose than poetry. So much depends on the reader.


  2. I’m with you on the categorization front (as you know). So much more is possible when the restrictions of categories are lost and you can really spread your wings.

    I like your piece a lot, but yoga sounds positively painful!

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    1. lol! I didn’t mean for yoga to sound painful 😉 It really isn’t; in fact, I love the feel of my spine (finally) opening up after sitting for hours at a desk. Glad you liked the poem 🙂


  3. As you point out, something is always lost when we box things in. Loved your prose poem. The phrasing snaps just as much as each vertebrae. 😉 You certainly highlight the “pain” part of that “No pain, no gain,” dictum and deftly tie it into a memory.

    And thanks for introducing me to Cortazar. I enjoyed Continuity of the Parks as well.

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  4. Yours was the best, and I’m not just saying that. I think you have managed to make your Prose Poem relevant to the reader. We could “see” you in your Yogi positions. The beautiful juxtaposition of the camera and spine was flawless.

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  5. Very cool, Marie! I love that you’re writing different types of poems in your class! Love that “shining my heart”!!! That poem about the injured friend is disturbing.

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    1. Hi, Luanne! Yes, I’m really enjoying the opportunity (and guidance) to try forms new to me. I was quite taken with Nelson’s “lyric essay.” It is very disturbing but still makes me want to read more …


  6. Prose poetry serves as a good reminder of how important sound and rhythm is to all types of writing. Story is important in fiction, but I also seek elevation of language. This prose poem post also reminds me of an exercise one of my high school teachers did upon starting a poetry unit. She asked for volunteers to give her a book they were reading so she could turn the opening paragraph into a poem. She split the line breaks to achieve a poetic effect. It did the job of showing students poetry in in all prose, just as prose is in all poetry 🙂

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    1. That’s a really great exercise, Jeri. One that was suggested in my class was to take random lines from a novels and then arrange them into a poem. There’s so much I want to try, but so few hours in the day 😉


  7. I really like your prose poem, Marie. There’s a nice rhythm to it, matches your breath. Your poem also made me think back to when I had a regular yoga practice and how I felt this way every single time I hit the mat!

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    1. Thank you! The older I get, the more yoga feels like a visit to the chiropractor, like I’m self-adjusting 🙂 I love it, though and practice about 3 times a week.

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